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"I need Him"
  by KatieBoo


I gave Him Ma H3art
I hop3 h3 will n3v3r hurt it
Without him ma lif3 ma lif3 is a livin h3ll
Without him its lik3 th3 moon
without th3 sun
And Day without night
I kno h3 will n3v3r hurt m3
and h3 knos ill n3v3r hurt him
I will always hav3 ma crush3s
but i think i might
hav3 found th3 guy
that is mr. right!!!
I LOV3 HIM 4 3V3R
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Date Submitted: Sep 23, 2008 (11:25 AM)
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  kinnaird
10/09/08 (11:42 AM) 
i dont think that you need to add rhymes. just the emotion and the feeling that u portray in this piece shows ure love and gets ure point across!

  Ricky Ross
10/02/08 (07:38 PM) 
good first poem. keep at it and you will become better at it

  crippled_enigm...
09/29/08 (11:21 AM) 
This is somewhat touching There are those who have hearts that may feel this one and then there are those who have no taste...keep it up

  Sage LaKasanov...
09/24/08 (11:46 AM) 
i think u need to add some rhymes

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