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"I needed you"
  by hiswife0926


Will she be there when all the money runs out?
We already know u can count on me… that’s me no doubt
But yet we always want what we can’t have
I shake my head to think how sad
We treat the ones that love us so bad

A man grow up believing what he makes make him a man
Never stop to think it’s a woman who made man
And although money can bring you happiness
When it run out its that women that will be there to hear your sadness

But she won’t be there, her love is not real
Let that money run out and u will see the real deal
But I remember every time I needed you
And you where not there...to busy chasing something that never existed
Coming to me now that the chick is going ballistic

Where were u when I need you…
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Date Submitted: Sep 12, 2008 (05:18 PM)
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  poetress1913
10/15/08 (01:14 PM) 
Wow I loved this poem! It is almost like my poem "Good Girl". Good write! We need to let men know not to sleep on the real women.

  ash_g
09/26/08 (03:44 PM) 
i agree....alot of guys do this...not all.but alot of em.i really liked it tho....great write.

  BAD AZZ YELLA ...
09/20/08 (09:03 AM) 
so many of dem chasing something for nothing when dey already got it right in der face. dey just dont know it until u not der no more

  D1Uadore305
09/13/08 (03:07 PM) 
many guys (not all) suffer from this disease. They get everything twisted until the female goes "balliatic". Only thing a real female can do is simply pick a guy who doesn't suffer from this disease.

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