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"I Played.....She Listened"
  by Zenpoet
  - This Poem is a response to the poem The Piano Player by XPERIENCE


piano in the dark -
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I played piano
Not just the banging
of keys…..mundane melodies
Dulcet tones that stirred souls.
Methodical…..trancelike
Emotions flowed from
the depths of my being
Poured forth from my aching
fingertips and spilled out
unto ebony and ivory.
Loud, cataclysmic crescendos
and soft….melancholy

I played…..she listened

Caught in the riptide of my
symphonic bombast.
A mere mask…..disguising
deep unhealed scars.
Wounds that lay open
yet unseen.
She listened and she saw
what many before had missed.

I played…..she listened

We were inextricably linked
The umbilical chord of life
tied us together.
By my side, as my hand guided
hers…..together we played.
Our notes fused, morphed,
became more than the sum
total of us.
What we had wrought was
something beautiful…..indefinable.
It just was and that’s all we needed
to know.

I played…..she listened…..and understood

We are both the better for it


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Date Submitted: Dec 04, 2008 (12:53 AM)
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  Shiko
12/07/08 (07:32 PM) 
this is so smooth and sensual...it made me smile...very few writers can do that for me. Beautiful.

  SlimCutta
12/07/08 (03:31 PM) 
I read X's and when i saw your response i knew it was goin to be just as hot and as on point as hers...very great poets flowing very well..this is poetry at its best..very well done

  ASympl3Diamond
12/05/08 (09:46 PM) 
"Methodical…..trancelike Emotions flowed from the depths of my being Poured forth from my aching fingertips and spilled out unto ebony and ivory..A mere mask…..disguising deep unhealed scars. Wounds that lay open yet unseen. She listened and she saw what many before had missed. I played…..she listened We were inextricably linked The umbilical chord of life tied us together. By my side, as my hand guided hers…..together we played"------- this was beautifully written ab i love them lines

  BlessedOne
12/04/08 (08:32 PM) 
Great response. She listened and she saw what many before had missed...When someone actually gets you [and understood]...wow. We all want to meet that person who plays in the same key.

  Disoriented Di...
12/04/08 (10:33 AM) 
ooh Zen this was beautiful its has been a while since i've read something of this matter...very nice to read this.

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