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"I QUiT!! [SEPT 2. 07 LAST DAY 0N THE J0B]"
  by (*B00*)


i QUiT!!!
im done with striving for perfection
to satisfy you
done changing so much of myself to make sure i look exceptable to you
im done with relationships changing
stuck wishing they were the same
doing everything to keep them together
just to find you playing a game
im done speaking my mind
trying to get people to understand
trying to get heard
because silence iiS my best weapon
and it should be FEARED more than my words
im done being [B00]
"The One People Can Go To"
no longer will i be the cushion that breaks their falls
lending them an ear to fill with their pains and sorrows
while all and all i fall
im done with the sleepless nights
with so much on my mind
stressing so hard to leave the painfull memories behind
seems the more i keep in contact with you
the more i go through
the more i change
the more my situation becomes strained
im
done being the mold that people make of me
"i QUiT!"
today was the last day on the job
open spot available
submit your applications
im done with the downfalls.
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Date Submitted: Sep 02, 2007 (11:59 PM)
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  Eddy
04/04/08 (02:10 AM) 
This is hot ma... You express your emotions so well... You got me wantin to feel out an application... 10 stars ma

  el nene
01/06/08 (10:13 PM) 
ay i like da concept or wahteva its called of this you spoke ur mind on sum real shit...i feel i dontlike hearin ereybody else issues when i got sum of my own 10strz

  RA1N
09/30/07 (07:43 PM) 
"no longer will i be the cushion that breaks their falls lending them an ear to fill with their pains and sorrows while all and all i fall" when u said that i was like wow jada got alot better with her writeing im proud of u i remember when u 1st started and u said u didnt want to be on this site cause u not a poet and now u got tons of poems on here this poem i know what u feel in this poem im the person that people alwayz run to when they got problems and sometimes that put budens on me...
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  Azon
09/04/07 (05:43 AM) 
Damn this was off the chain the emotion in this one can eazyly be seen and the way you put this down was very crazy like the way you wrote it was very capdviting

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