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"I Remeber..."
  by babygur
  - This Poem is a response to the poem REMEMBER by KiNg-Go0B3r


I Remember all the times we had..
They were good..
And they were bad..
You'd hold me close..
And NEVER let go..

You used to kiss all on my neck..when you came home in the middle of the night.
And if a nigga talk to me smart...you'd hold me down tight.
You used to show me things that I never knew...
Man we used to be stuck together like paper and glue.

I didnt wanna leave...but life was pushin me away..
But tonight lets make love like everthings o.k.
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Date Submitted: Jun 30, 2008 (01:45 PM)
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  aiwifey
08/19/08 (06:21 PM) 
thee finishing part to a real love story....oh so cute!!!! ilove it!

  daidai_dts4l
07/24/08 (05:34 PM) 
lol dat last line....dis was gud ma keep it up

  Ab
07/18/08 (03:06 PM) 
Nice Piece right here. Keep The Ink Printing

  RON-G
06/30/08 (05:46 PM) 
this is nice im feeling this the last line was some real shit people do it all the time

  KiNg-Go0B3r
06/30/08 (02:10 PM) 
iight then lets do it haha but jokes aside i luved ya response i gotta fav it

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