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"I rise from the smoke"
  by Tpoet


I rise from the smoke as these rings break thoughts chain
allowing linked wishes to sore through hands
the caress of hopes dreams wraps around fingers ring
binding hearts to puffs of air.....breath.....inhale
truths breath and exhale lies want to be intertwined in us
blow away fears smog and bath in the sweet sent of loves aroma......
Taste the smell of future joys and digest past mistakes
find the recipe for us in the potluck lunch of memories
stored away in cups watered down by tears
lets drink up and replenish our souls thirst so as not to forget
to bath in each others eyes desires of drowning in this renewed love of self.....
Listening with adult words and a child’s innocent heart
rise with me and let the smoke cleanse your soul
soak in these amber ashes and burn these visions of déjà vu
slip into me and feed on my hearts heart
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Date Submitted: Aug 31, 2009 (09:37 PM)
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  BlessedOne
10/01/09 (05:51 PM) 
...Like the Phoenix. Happy that I missed this one because it gave me some comfort...I miss you girl.

  big josh
09/04/09 (07:53 PM) 
wow this was very inspirational and an enjoy to read. really nice piece

  Quite
09/02/09 (12:39 PM) 
very well put sis

  MzSpoon aka "T...
08/31/09 (09:58 PM) 
Thanks for posting, TPoet. Love your work.

  CUSHIONZ
08/31/09 (09:43 PM) 
inspirational piece ...I love the positive flow expressed here .....** cleansing of the soul ** .....Kudos

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