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"I Spit that Artificial..."
  by RoyalT


I speak that artificial
candycoated stuff your mouths
and spill in pockets full of empty
press your face against transparency
what you want? dont mean to bribe...
but i...
got all assortments,lies every color
charcoal black,and stereotype white
if you're lucky you'll find a jelly-like
distruth inside

i spit that fake ishh,
that constipation-kneel-and-squirm-so
-hard-that-you-cant-feel-your-face
ishh...
that toilet war bomb splissh..ish
hold your bendy straws in the air and take a sip,
raise your noses and take a whiff
plasticbabyposeforthecameraCauseyou'reFLAWLESS

i spit that joyful,joyful
make you shed a tear or two
that achey-breaky-heart nonsense
xoxo
i h a t e you!

i cough up what you dont wanna hear
if i shoveled all of the flem out my throat
you'd still say that im unclear...
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Date Submitted: Nov 22, 2008 (04:13 PM)
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  terrenababii
11/23/08 (04:57 PM) 
wow...speechless//. i loveeee this! its like....idk. it gave me dis unexplainable feeling of confidence bekus its a ..confident poem. lol its like a person wit dis....aura, dis emotion, dis swagGa, dis freshnesssS sumtin! lol omg i love the third and fourth stanzas. LOVE them "that achey-breaky-heart nonsense xoxo i h a t e y o u" damn. dat makes heartbreak sound good! lol i love dis who thing. ten stars!!!!!!!! MORE MORE MORE oh, and perfecto ending! xoxo ♥terrena

  Rissa14
11/23/08 (01:34 PM) 
[.line three::pocket FULL of EMPTY..look like me and you relating again.huh?.]..wow i loveee this poem. this is definitely one of my new and all-time favorites.its madd deep and extremely original..its like you got your point across, and the concept is good. i lovee the sarcasm that you used all throughout the poem..loveed the last line of the second stanza..and from there..all my favorite. princiee poooo! you did it again. speehless.amazed..in awe.wow..inspired. ten stars and a favorite. xoxo...
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  Disoriented Di...
11/22/08 (09:28 PM) 
LMAO....even on your swagger you're words are fly...i enjoyed this...

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