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"I Still Love You (To My X bestfriend)"
  by BLAKK ROSE


Saw you when I was working, I almost made my stomach turn/
A lil bit of excitement, but mostly it burned/
Lookin good I must admit, had on a nice outfit/
Before the conversation we small talked a lil bit/
Then walked outside to see what you wanted to discuss/
10 page letter handed to me read it beckuz/
I thought it would be somethin to ease the pain/
But instead I got it like Teddy ckuz it brang me more Pain/
But I refrained from callin you names/
Even when you said well never be friends again/
Ckuz you still feeling like youll go thru the same/
Cycle, of you wanting me again/
But you gotta boyfriend though, so why am I an issue?/
To be without you Sara, is harder than being friends with you/
I believe we ckan give at second attempt/
Might as well just kept my mouth zipped/
They all said you'd return It was something I believed/
But I didnt think It would be a 2nd ending/
Reiterating why me and you cant be "we"/
With more details, something I really didnt need/
I guess we way too different Indeed, I see/
Ckuz you a pessimist & Im thinkin optimistically/
I need to leave it alone, but its harder than you think/
But I gotta kiss kiss it goodbye like Chris B/
So do you wanna be friends???... If not thats coo/
But itll hurt deep ckuz I still love you/

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Date Submitted: Oct 08, 2007 (12:29 AM)
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  BLACK STORM
10/10/07 (08:31 PM) 
IM FEELIN THIS...........I KNOW WHAT THIS FEEL LIKE......I HAD A NERVOUS FEELIN JUST READIN THIS..LOL..........ANOTHA CLASSIC PIECE

  Afroditee
10/09/07 (09:17 PM) 
ahhhh....you laid your heart on a sleeve for this one, and I love the hint of vulnerability showing through this one. Made me wanna tear up. I LOVED this!! And, there are so many who can identify with the emotions expressed...sigh...

  Versatile
10/08/07 (10:46 AM) 
Yea I'm feeling this write. It's crazy how things can still remain after they're long gone. And you expressed that deeply. Nie write.

  ty
10/08/07 (10:26 AM) 
i feel this i understand it and i give you kudos for it a great write keep doing what you do.

  sexxy brown su...
10/08/07 (10:14 AM) 
I like the deep feeling of emotions in this piece. I can tell you really had a connection with this girl at one point in time, and you still care about her deeply. Its hard to see that person that you called your lover, your best friend, not be that person you once knew, because you know a totally different side of them. Only time can heal. i know is been said thousand times, but times does tell and you will love again.

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