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"I THOUGHT I MADE MY SELF CLEAR"
  by LADYFAITH
  - This Poem is a response to the poem SHE DOES NOT LOVE ME by loren


SORRY FOR HAVING TO BREAK IT TO YOU THIS WAY.
BUT I NEVER WAS FEELING YOU THAT WAY.
I THOUGHT I GAVE YOU ALL THE RIGHT

YOU CALL....
I DONT ANSWER OR CALL BACK.
YOU SENT A TEXT
AND I DELET IT OFF THE BACK.

WHEN YOU CALL FROM EM BLOCK NUMBERS
ALL I DO IS ANSWER AND PLAY LIKE AM MY MAMA
SAYING..."MIA NOT HERE I'LL TELL HER TO CALLYOU BACK."

IF YOU DIDNT GET THAT HINT...
I KNOW YOU FAILED THE FCAT.

THE BIGGEST ONE OF THEM ALL WAS WHEN I PUT MY NEW DUDE ON MY MACHINE.

YOU TELLING ME YOU STILL DIDNT GET THE PICUTRE LISTENING TO HIM HIM
SING
ABOUT HOW HE LOVE ME AND ALL THAT OTHER STUFF.

I GUESS THAT JUST WASNT CLEAR ENOUGH.
BUT HOW ABOUT THIS

POINT BLANK I WAS NOT FEELING YOU!
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Date Submitted: Jun 18, 2009 (10:21 PM)
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  Jazzy Storm
10/21/09 (01:17 PM) 
Wow...I am loving this response. I agree it was a little harsh, but sometimes they just don\'t get the picture and you have to be this way. Awesome scribe. keep pushing the pen, poet.

  **(($uD3))**
06/19/09 (12:38 PM) 
HARSH....BUT MAKEs SENSE...i HAD T0 D0 MY EX LiKE THAT....HE DiDNT GET THE P0iNT ND PR0LLEM NEVER WiLL...BUT WH0 CARES i CHANGE MY NUMBER 0N HiM....MAYBE THAT W0ULD'VE W0RKd F0R Y0U..=] BUT GREAT WRiTE...10 STARz FR0M ME

  loren
06/19/09 (10:09 AM) 
THIS IS A GR8 RESPONSE INDEED....THE WAY U HAVE PUT THE EMOTIONS....10

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