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"I took a step outside myself"
  by xCLuSiV3BiiSH


I took a step outside of myself so I can understand the pain
But the ill feelings still remain
I did nothing wrong to get what you gave
You go behind my back and then expect to be forgave
Can you help me understand where things started to change?
When you stop acting like my best friend and started acting strange
Can you show me where I hurt you because I’m not seeing it on your face
Look in your heart? Something tell me that’s also been replaced
I stuck up for you and lost friends from long before
I gave you all my loyalties and still you asked for more
Yes we can be friends but it will never be the same
Don’t think I’m the one to blame
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Date Submitted: Apr 20, 2007 (08:17 AM)
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  Quite
07/28/08 (03:42 AM) 
very good poem

  Mr. RTJ
05/28/07 (01:14 PM) 
i can really feel this. stepping outside yourself helps a lot to sort through your mind. great write.

  Soule
05/02/07 (11:22 AM) 
Yeah I know these feelings of betrayal. Nice job in relating your emotions within the lines of this write.

  J'ecrite
04/27/07 (09:29 PM) 
Wow. I like this. the pain here is very evident. But I like how you kept it together and put it down real smooth. The flow is effortless.

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