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"I Used To Love Her (I still Do)"
  by musiq=rell


I met this girl when I was 10 years old,
She was captivating; she was fascinating,
She was what I needed I had to have her,
She’s my soul born on the streets she was ruthless,
she’s my lady and I’m her gangsta.
From the streets 2 da playgrounds she found her swagger,
She cut through me like a dagger.
4rm da playground 2 da gym I knew she was in it 2 win it.
She flowed like water in a river cross her path she’ll make ur ankles quiver. She’s all I ever needed she’s my light I’m her salvation;
She’s my soul she keeps me whole.
She’s the blood that flows through my veins,
Even though she causes me pain
And makes my mind go insane I can't complain,
Because my luv still remains the same.
*Ode 2 the game I love to play basketball*
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Date Submitted: Oct 06, 2008 (08:28 PM)
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  $Frenchy$
12/07/08 (01:43 PM) 
haha i never read this one. hmmm, im seriously slacking i guess lol. this is great! i love how you described your love for basketball, as a love for a woman...lovedddd it! great write!

  A.Renee
10/17/08 (07:01 PM) 
this was also a good piece, it was clever how u put your in emotions about basketball, in a metphor of a female good one

  1225
10/17/08 (02:19 PM) 
WOW really its a good about your childhood gurl. love it. ~fuck D@ free WORLD~

  P03tIC@LLY SK!...
10/15/08 (11:11 PM) 
i love the play on the words...i like it a lot...ten stars

  danceluv
10/07/08 (01:24 AM) 
shyt me too dat my bitch... lol but wow kid you got skills ... mos def can write n great words usage n play on wordz...a fave of mines n ten*s boo keep doin you

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