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"I Wake Up"
  by Bratt




I wake up in the morning
And I no longer see you sound asleep
I wake up in the morning
And I don’t feel the comfort of your arms around me
I wake up in the morning
And I no longer hear the smooth melody of your heart beat
I wake up in the morning
And I no longer have a warm spot on my neck from where you use to breathe
I wake up in the morning
An from my eyes tears just seem to stream
I wake up in the morning
An in my bed your no longer laying next to me
I wake up in the morning
And I pray that forever this will never be
I wake up in the morning
An I’m only half alive cause you’re the other part of me and without you I’m incomplete
In & Ex-ternally
I am you and you are me!
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Date Submitted: Nov 14, 2008 (09:07 PM)
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  acey
12/07/08 (09:59 AM) 
ma this writen very and i feel u on everyting u r saying

  SmAsH/BaByFaCe
12/06/08 (08:06 PM) 
Anotha wirte that i'm liking..u got skillz mama 4 ur age but then again age aint nothing but a number so im defintiely giving you your props..keep it up...10 out of 10

  Da Realest Cri...
12/04/08 (12:39 PM) 
you this piece was.... ok 7

  revolt
11/28/08 (06:57 PM) 
tight verses

  king of sweeth...
11/18/08 (07:54 PM) 
that was a real good poem n i enjoy read it keep up the good work ma 10

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