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"I Wake Up"
  by Bratt




I wake up in the morning
And I no longer see you sound asleep
I wake up in the morning
And I don’t feel the comfort of your arms around me
I wake up in the morning
And I no longer hear the smooth melody of your heart beat
I wake up in the morning
And I no longer have a warm spot on my neck from where you use to breathe
I wake up in the morning
An from my eyes tears just seem to stream
I wake up in the morning
An in my bed your no longer laying next to me
I wake up in the morning
And I pray that forever this will never be
I wake up in the morning
An I’m only half alive cause you’re the other part of me and without you I’m incomplete
In & Ex-ternally
I am you and you are me!
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Date Submitted: Nov 14, 2008 (09:07 PM)
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  kbakeexo
02/19/09 (12:16 PM) 
This is definitely one of my favorite poems. This was soo well written. I loved the way you expressed yourself in this poem. This write from you almost made me cry. It was so powerful and emotional. Very nicely done. Keep writing hun!

  Ulises
11/17/08 (08:03 PM) 
This was real good ma,you really expressed yourself well and made the reader feel your emotions,10 stars gurl

  sexycarmel08
11/16/08 (12:09 AM) 
Awllll...... Tis is so sweet..... I luv tis poem.... U really have a way wit words.... Keep it up gurl..... U go gurl.......

  Iaintgot1
11/15/08 (05:40 PM) 
Wow. This is a beautiful write. I almost felt tears coming from eyes. Such a lonely feeling to have someone you love so much leave your side. 10 stars.

  Desire4Fire
11/15/08 (04:17 PM) 
"I'm only half alive because you're the other part of me" -i love that line this was raw emotion... 10 starz ma

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