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"I Want Her"
  by H.H. Holloway
  - This Poem is a response to the poem I Want You by Harmony07



My dearest Harmony with the wind in her hair
eyes twinkle wishes, while I thank my lucky stars
from afar, she reaches out for my affection
I'm so captivated--her body is a science
that I yearn to master, thoroughly
listening to her philosophy of puppy love
and passionate insanity
crashing into breathless reaction--we gasp
within each other's grasps
I can taste her every moan, upon my tongue
-I want her-
she knows this
so she inches upon me, deeper even

this is so delicious
her scents drive me wild
her every curve is fruit
that I sink my teeth into

I crave her arches
I yearn for her bends
I growl for her sprawls
she is my greatest prey

I hunt her throughout the sheets
here behind closed doors
while she continues to give chase
yet she enjoys getting caught

she entices me while I pounce upon her
from behind--she purrs and snarls for my scratches
I smack to the request of her servitude
she simply gives herself to me
I harbor no discretion, while I lavish
in the ravishing secretions that she screams
in the hint of a whisper
we are each other's elixirs--perfect drug combination
exquisite mix of chemistry
juices that melt thus together
rhythmic coordination, just right: Perfect, even
she purrs, thus again
I plunge deeper this time
eye contact throughout this occasion
she tries to turn away
but I look into her even deeper
and shed my soul
through her seduction
that she lusts to love, unconditionally
she wants me to stay
inside of her
forever
beyond this night
beyond this feeling
beyond every climax
that we continue to exchange
she wants me to say her name
so I repeat it as an (((Echo)))
she knows that I'm sincere
as I proceed to adhere
and conquer every fear
that she thinks of manifesting
in the crest of carnal guesses
that has kept her in the likes
of like-minded leeches
trying to suck her dry
all because she bears
thick-set thighs and a pearl
set of pretty eyes
but my desires penetrate deeper
than any normal sized schlong
I'm endowed to explore further
until sugar walls melt into candy rain
and we continue to talk about this
yet again...






Marvin Gaye - I Want You.mp3 - Marvin Gaye
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Date Submitted: Oct 09, 2008 (09:13 PM)
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  LAB **Ms. Cool...
10/10/08 (08:44 AM) 
as I proceed to adhere and conquer every fear that she thinks of manifesting in the crest of carnal guesses that has kept her in the likes of like-minded leeches trying to suck her dry all because she bears thick-set thighs and a pearl set of pretty eyes" that was so lovely Holloway.

  Harmony07
10/10/08 (02:55 AM) 
o WOW! i couldn't have said it better myself! a very eloquent response indeed...and so delicious...we might juss have to do a follow up collab...i'm feelin ya style n ya flow! mos def a fave for me! keep the pen goin!

  mz_April
10/09/08 (09:14 PM) 
damn yo i like this peice a lot ya did ya thang i aint mad at that 10 starz

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