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"I Want"
  by WIZ
  - This Poem is a response to the poem What Do You Want From Me ? by loren


I want the ocean's to part
To wash away and restart
My Lucky with a New Heart!

If only my tears could speak
They'd drown out your pain
No more havoc to leak

I want the mountains to rise
I want only blue skies

I pray for the sunshine to lite up your moon
I pray for your soul
I pray for it soon

To rise with the mountain,
never to stop

Never look back,
never to drop

Fly to the place where your wings will stay strong!
I sing to your Heart,
Your a masterpiece of only God's song!
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Date Submitted: Nov 24, 2008 (10:49 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 12/30/08 (01:24 PM)
Author: loren
Poem Title: I Got Wings

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comment icon  COMMENTS (12)
  Shiko
12/30/08 (06:48 PM) 
so beautiful ..... :)

  Lozzodoodle
12/22/08 (09:41 AM) 
this was very inspirational and showed clearly that a positive attitude towards life can have a great effect on you. it can open your mind and make you feel happier. we have a lot to look forward to in life but we forget that sometimes x

  jerl
12/11/08 (10:08 PM) 
Now you know which part of this write is my favorite. " Fly to a place where your heart wings will stay strong; I sing to your heart, Your a masterpiece of only GOD'S song"! Loving your words, reading the message behind them makes my heart soar. Keep doing the work of the LORD! May HE always abundantly bless you!

  Stoykes
12/11/08 (01:15 PM) 
this is touching. i love the response as to 'what do you want'? these are words that i would love to be told. feels so sincere. great job WIZ! ~Stoykes

  angeleyes1
12/01/08 (09:03 AM) 
very beautifully written and loving this one 100 stars here keep flowing with your words much love

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