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"I Want Pussy Not Peaches"
  by Brokenvegtable
  - This Poem is a response to the poem GA Peach by Heavenz_Finest


So slow, my tongue to lick up and down on you pussy lips
I feel your flesh get so wet, dripping onto my face
My lips make small kisses on you thighs
I take my time to make sure you know, just what I take pride in doing

My tongue move your lips apart, I flick my way between them
Taking every drop of you with me, I sip on the juice you give me
Slowly making circles around your pussy
Leaving no part of you dry, what a delight it is to eat you out

As I get deep into you with my tongue, I start to suck one each of your lips
Then I bite down so soft and with great ease as I pull on you
Waiting for your moan to tell me….just how good it feels
Again I take my tongue and press it into your pussy, going deep between your lips

I lick out all of your bodies wetness as my face is snuggled up in you
I begin to breathe on you and blow so lightly as I work magic with my tongue
Licking and pressing and licking and tonguing you deep
As if we were fucking, but its still just my tongue

I begin to rub on the top of your pussy lips with my fingers
As I lick between your lips again and again, making sure you stay wet
As I bring my fingers down and around your pussy
I lick with my tongue and then start to slide into you a finger

I work my finger around inside of you with each stroke of my tongue
I feel you work your hips against my finger as you want more more more
Licking my finger dry as it comes out and then works back in
The smell of you wanting me to eat you out is second to none

Your pussy calls to me, wanting my tongue to lick it and my finger to fuck it
As if my dick wasn’t enough reason to want something, you have to want the good stuff
A soft wet tongue licking away at your pussy and then sticking it in you with my finger too
What a combo to be fucked twice in the same motion, as I wait for your ocean to fill me up

I want you to cum all over me, mark me with your scent make me your slave
Tell me to fuck you with my tongue and lick up all your cum
Tell me I have been a bad boy and make me lick you clean
Tell me you want me to eat your pussy out, tell me you don’t want me to stop

Tell me you want more……..
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Date Submitted: Oct 11, 2008 (03:51 AM)
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comment icon  COMMENTS (6)
  Ms. Poetess
12/11/08 (12:09 PM) 
okay BV i see you were all in thought with this one..i dont know why it seems like you were playing the whole thing out in the process of this write but by all mean carry on and give me more..pen on

  Juicy1on1
11/23/08 (06:05 AM) 
I had damn near dozed off at work but this right here definitely woke me completely up. Thank you for that right there I can make it through this last hour now.

  foremanlin
11/19/08 (10:21 AM) 
This was just as intense as it gets, I love all of the detail, the metaphors, wordplay, the whole damn ball of wax, you got it going on a def. 10x10 you know what you are doing. A favorite in my book, keep 'em cumming.

  REALKISSES
10/29/08 (03:16 PM) 
DAMNNNNN.... IM ON FIRE WITH THIS ONE. U RIGHT I DEF LOVE THIS ONE. WORD PLAY CRAZY TITLE GOES PERFECT

  Heavenz_Finest
10/11/08 (07:47 PM) 
What can I say? I enjoyed the reading, very nice response. You made sure to give every detail almost like whichever woman reads this feels like it's her. I must say you'll defintely make any woman want more of what you're offering. Smile.

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