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"I Want to Feel Your Touch"
  by foremanlin


I want to feel your
hands on me,
caressing me gently,
making me feel your
heart against my
body with every stroke,
until I reach the pinnacle
of pleasure,
the gesture of joy,
the caring way
you lay me open
with love and adoration
until I feel your
physical attentiveness
become a fire between us,
as pleasure takes us to
totally new heights,
and then brings us
back down again,
that leaves us with our
release.
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Date Submitted: Dec 04, 2008 (03:33 AM)
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  jerl
01/23/09 (11:33 PM) 
Okay now, it's getting warm in here. Passion, that was the fuel used to write this poem. This is so hot, i feel the heat over here, and I'm the only one here. You go girl, your poetic pen is working over time now. Surely this held my attention!

  Peoples
12/16/08 (07:58 PM) 
Quick and easy flow, quite satisfying. Good write, ma.

  Intense Penstr...
12/12/08 (12:55 PM) 
thsi was short ..but effective.. nicely expressed. i enjoyed reading . thanks

  (Floetic~One) ...
12/07/08 (09:01 PM) 
wow this iz very hot... i enjoyed reading this piece. you are amazing... keep doin your thang. 10 starz

  MAVRICK
12/04/08 (10:22 AM) 
another nicely done expression of love yearned for and climatically attained...

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