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"I Want You"
  by Harmony07


Hey Hun...i wany yo mouf
I want you to delve into the recesses of me and tasted the elixir of my juicez
it'll be yo youth potion
and you can tell folkz i keep you young at heart
and what we have can be similar to puppy love or dat first crush in middle school
beggin ya ma to let you stay on the phone for "15 mo' minutes...PLEASE?"
fallin asleep a few hours later, listenin to each other breathe
i want you to bury your face in my most intimate placez
my mind, my heart, and my mound
i want you to spoil me wit yo tongue cuz i know how u love to go down
make me lose control and push your face even closer cuz the job you're doing is fantastic
Then come up n let me taste myself causing my sexual actions to become drastic
I'm out of control now, i've lost all thoughtz beside those that include u inside me
i dont even realize that i'm scratchin ya back up so i dont think to say "i'm sorry"
i want you to take control of me,
take on my lust and turn it into the trust i denied you in the beginning
Twist that trust a lil and we'll make Love...one that has no existent ending
Orgasms cum flowing out of us
urz streaming into me
But we are FAR from finished yet,
we havent even opened up the whipped cream
The rest of what we do i wont put to the public eyez
i'm sure they can imagine
They know i'm a freak, so u must be too
for us to be so compatible
And as i shut the door to our room on all our nosy neighborz n friendz
i give a sneak peek of you pourin oil in ya hand...
haha
The End. [lolz]
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Date Submitted: Oct 09, 2008 (09:40 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 10/09/08 (09:13 PM)
Author: H.H. Holloway
Poem Title: I Want Her

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  H.H. Holloway
10/09/08 (09:01 PM) 
*Tilts head to the side--horns protrude* Hmmm--well... eh, nevermind--I'll simply say that this was indeed an erotic piece of teaser for your fans

  ♥Poetic~...
10/09/08 (03:30 PM) 
oh wow..... i guess you ready to for someone to give you the business huh? lmao really liking the flow of this one sis, very sensual and the ending was cool as hell *looks down*.... OMG.... this mufuckah still on this shit?!? like for real? and got the audacity to call himself the bestever, @ what? being ignorant, cuz thats the the only conclusion that i can come to.......*mumbles* stupid ass motherfucker

  illest_PERSONA
10/09/08 (02:30 PM) 
OOooOoOo, I can't hate, this poem is the business. lol I'm happy that you're not afraid to say what you wanna say but you do it in a way that's in unbearably adorable. :) nice write

  MarQuia
10/09/08 (12:43 PM) 
Wow...

  jdbrown
10/09/08 (10:11 AM) 
hit me up so we can make that a reality, hot write

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