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"I wasn't there..."
  by Angel


Just the other day, my love came calling
with flowers and candy and all things sweet
A knowing grin in his eyes,
smiles arise on his cheeks, as he… stood knocking

Feeling like springtime all over the inside
So many heartfelt truths he wanted to let slide…
from his lips to my ears – But I…

well, I… wasn’t there

Could've been just inside sleeping
or, perhaps he’d just… missed me

I mean, regardless of the circumstances,
my heart is his for keeps –

part of me
is hoping he knows, for himself, these things
as he stands… knocking – silently vowing
to stay a few minutes more

In his heart, he’d wait an eternity for love

And he did, I’m sure…
but, really… I wouldn’t know

(you see, I wasn’t there…)


** Just a thought really... about a "hit and miss" type love... there's all sorts out there, you know... **

Bring Me Flowers - Hope
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Date Submitted: Aug 27, 2009 (12:10 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 08/27/09 (11:25 PM)
Author: Fina
Poem Title: He is not here...

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comment icon  COMMENTS (6)
  piss a mofo of...
08/28/09 (10:02 AM) 
*sighs*...i missed mine to many times because i just keep changing addresses and leaving no forwarding address, hidden from the eyes that may have spotted me...thanks for the scribe and the inspiration this a.m.

  Duice
08/27/09 (11:34 PM) 
I especially liked the thought you provoked at the end, it makes it personal to the reader.

  Soul Lyrikal
08/27/09 (10:44 PM) 
You know you have a way with words and getting the reader entangled into your prose!

  Syndel
08/27/09 (06:54 PM) 
Very powerful write but you are about to make me go look for dude and beat him like Ms Ceily says

  Mouse13
08/27/09 (06:43 PM) 
lovelyy write..*snaps*

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