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"I wish..."
  by *JazISweet*


You make me sick, like having the flu in summer
I wish u were as invisible as the air that I breathe
I wish I could go 2 sleep and wake up to the day we first spoke
I swear if I could I'de make u eat every word until u choked
I wish I could take a knife and slice ur skin for every time u hurt me
I would leave u with scars that looked like burns of 3rd degree
I wish I could pour bleach into your mouth everytime u call me a bad name

I wish for one day u could be me just to feel my pain

I wish u knew how hard it is to pretend I dont give a fuck
I wish I could spit in your face for u being my longest period of BAD LUCK
I wish I didnt love u the way I think I do cuz you dont even care
Your selfish, obnoxious and immature and I'm glad I left u bare
No love, no happiness only emtyness inside you
Thats the way I want you to remain until you accept that we are through

Why must u hurt me? My energy you completely drain.
I dont want to know you anymore, because of you my heart is vain
I wish I could stick a needle in your tongue every time a tear fell from eye because of you
This way by the time you're done, your mouth will be filled with holes and no sound could get through

I wish I could HATE you for me feeling this way day and night
but I'm too good to be like you so I'll just keep wishing and put up a good fight.

Out of MIND : Out of SIGHT

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Date Submitted: Oct 13, 2008 (12:39 PM)
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  STANZA
12/23/08 (07:30 AM) 
yo thats heavy

  QueenV
11/25/08 (12:53 AM) 
"I wish your knew how hard it is to pretend i dont give a fuck"... I can so relate to this line esecially right now... Trust me I donno whats wrong with the penis species LOL...

  Tha Scorpion
10/20/08 (12:23 PM) 
Simply another Jaz masterpiece, I haven't read you in a while babe, but you never disappoint. This point was conveyed!!

  Bestever
10/17/08 (03:54 PM) 
Powerful writing... Is this creativity or someone really did those things to u? Either way, I dig the write:)

  ASympl3Diamond
10/13/08 (08:08 PM) 
"I swear if I could I'de make u eat every word until u choked I wish I could take a knife and slice ur skin for every time u hurt me I would leave u with scars that looked like burns of 3rd degree I wish I could pour bleach into your mouth everytime u call me a bad name I wish for one day u could be me just to feel my pain"--damn damn damn..ive been there before! *deep sigh* good to see the pen reviving once more

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