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"I WISH I WAS A BITCH!!!"
  by mscookie2u
  - This Poem is a response to the poem I Wish I was a Hoe by Reeta


**FROM A BITCHES POINT OF VIEW. HAVE YOU EVER NOTICED THAT YOUR ALL KINDS OF NAMES WITH A NIGGA THAT AINT ABOUT SHIT, BUT HE CAN LOOK HIMSELF IN THE MIRROR AND NOT SEE A BITCH??"***

READING YOUR WORDZ GOT ME THINKING,
TOO MANY GS LADIES GOT THIS SHIT IN COMMON,
AND SINCE YOUR PEN STOPPED MOVING,
I GOT MINES AND STARTED INKING.
MY PAGE WITH,
WHAT ID DO IF I WAS A BITCH???
ID TAKE MY DICK OUT A PUSSY AND RUN LIKE THE FUCKIN WIND,
BECAUSE NO "HOE" COULD TIE MY DOWN,
NO "SLUT", NOT TODAY,
ID SMOOTH TALK THIS "TRICK",
INTO OPENING HER LEGS AND,
LEAVE MY SEMEN INSIDE TO FERTILIZE HER EGGS AND,
I KNOW WHAT COULD HAPPEN AND WHEN IT DID,
ID IGNORED THAT "TRAMP" AS SHE PLEADED AND BEGGED,
FOR MY HAND IN HELPING HER RAISE MY KIDS,
ID DUCK AND DODGE THE "WHITE MAN" TRYING TO GET MY BREAD,
I WOULD CALL HER THOUGH JUST TO FUCK WITH HER HEAD,
ID MAKE PROMISES OF DIAPERS AND ENFAMIL AND SHIT JUST FOR KICKS,
EVEN MONEY FOR BILLS,
SO WHEN SHE CALL I CAN SAY,
"HOE" BE FOR REAL,
THIS LIFE IS FUCKING GREAT,
IGNORING MY RESPONSIBILITY,
AINT NO STOPPING ME.
AS LONG AS SHE HOLDS THIS HATRED IN HER HEART,
SHE'LL AWAYS REMEMBER ME,
YEAH THATS WHAT ILL DO MAKE HER REMEMER,
SHIT... TO THINK ABOUT IT..
WHY WOULD I WANT TO BE A BITCH ASS NIGGA!!
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Date Submitted: Oct 25, 2008 (06:19 PM)
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  StraY12
11/21/08 (06:07 PM) 
Damn...this had some fury to it, and I'm feelin' that vibe you givin' off, cuz you stayin' truthful and twistin' errythin' round, which makes this so smooth, might hurt alot of peoples feelin's round my way, LoL you did your thing keep it up

  Ryta
11/02/08 (08:33 PM) 
nice write ma

  SupremeStar130
10/28/08 (11:20 AM) 
nice waqy to step out of your own shoes. very creative!!! good job girl!

  Bestever
10/26/08 (09:50 AM) 
this was interesting... Are u kinda lookin at this through a dudes eyes or what? Either way as far as writing, 10 strz:) Keep it up... Great flow

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