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"I Won't Let Go"
  by Group: My Generation


Like a flowerbed wishing for the rain
Held captive and bound with chains
I'm just waiting
For passion to arrive

Since love is gone
And tucked away
I sit and dream
In a cloud of gray
Like the pitch black sky
Waiting to cry
Like fallen teardrops left un-dried
It's not a hummingbird that excites me
That calls and invites me,
Not at all
But me dreaming of you
Is what I look forward to.

I want to become engulfed in the illusion
That you've become.
I'd like to soak my fingertips in colors
And paint each and every detail of you
Intentionally avoiding black and white
I want the hues to match the vibrance of my desire
So just once more
Make my pulse
Accentuate uncontrollably
Allow the pace to jump
Hop
But never ever stop
Make my heart
BURN
In ways that I've never felt

Love
Grab my hand
Take me to another land
And this time I promise

To not let go again
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Date Submitted: Aug 24, 2009 (02:32 PM)
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  Chocolate City
08/25/09 (07:22 PM) 
awwwww now the end was simply beautiful lol.. promise not to let go (again).. im loving the way this poem was put together.. nice one nice one

  Creativity 09
08/24/09 (09:52 PM) 
AWWWW dang this has... i love the word choice your metaphors are ridiculous!!! i like this piece a lot! great job

  Drea s
08/24/09 (08:18 PM) 
WWWOOOOWWWWWWW I LOVE THIS PIECE...IT WAS VERY HEARTFELT....VERY DEEP....U GAVE THE PERFECT IMAGERY....

  Dimplez
08/24/09 (08:10 PM) 
awww *sniff sniff* this was simply beautiful Sleezy, the flow was sick...I could definitely imagine you reciting this! You know this is a fav...right right lol

  lady innocent
08/24/09 (05:27 PM) 
this was pretty sweet dam i loved the words you used a ten and a fave

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