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"I would do it all over again….(SC Monday Challenge"
  by Group: Soul City
  - This Poem is a response to the poem I would do it all over again... by Planted Daisies


I would do it all over again….(SC Monday Challenge)

Even in the darkest hour
When solitude has let me in
All I want is for love to set me free
To feel the comfort of a touch
The taste of a kiss
A hold
A touch
A feeling beyond compare
The sweet taste of sweat
Beating off of your flesh
The sight of your beauty
The soul’s radiance is all I see
A long conversation
10 seconds in your deepest thoughts
9 of love
8 of happiness
7 of laughter
6 of joy
5 of sadness
Let me wipe those tears from your eyes
4 of pleasure
3 of adventure
2 of comfortable silences
And 1 second to look you in the eye
And let love in….
For I would walk in the pouring rain
Feel the snow on my feet
I would climb across the highest mountain
Sail across the Pacific Ocean
Walk the Sahara Desert
Come face to face with a volcanic eruption
Get pushed in a Tsunami wave
If your love would be on the other side
For a kiss from you would keep me alive

And even though I have tasted loves deceit
I have been torn and defeated
I would do it all over again…
I would let love in
Cause it’s a taste I cant resist
A touch I can’t live without
A feeling beyond compare
For I need love
Like I need air
Like the food I ingest
For love let’s me live….


Planted Daisies2009



"My loneliness like the night air, invisible to the eye, oblivious to the touch.
In its cold, uncomfortableness. Yet if I could do it all over again, I'd do it in the
same skin I'm in. To lay down and let love die. Just stay down and let love lie: No, no, not I. I'll stay 'round and let love fly. Even though I have seen its darkest form, deceit.
Nothing else could taste this warm...or feel this sweet. " -Taken from the movie ATL
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Date Submitted: Jul 04, 2009 (08:16 AM)
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  vandal
07/04/09 (08:58 AM) 
wow this piece was very creative and a joy to read, nice write

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