Poem: i write - by Aloni

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"i write"
by Aloni

Read my words and weep
The words that bounce of these pages are so deep
I strive for you to feel everything in saying
My words come together in serious facts never joking or playing
I catch your mind confusing and abusing
Tantalizing your thoughts with dissolutions
Knowing that all the facts that I'm damn good you despite
I let my haters be my motivators continuing mines
I Write

Date Submitted: Oct 06, 2008 (12:49 PM)

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fr3$h P

11/18/08 (05:14 PM)

hahahaha remember when obama gave that one speech that touched america's heart? got err body's grandmaa cryin and shit...remember? hahahaha dis kinna took me back to dat moment. lol shawty said " knowing that all the facts that i'm damn good you despite..." hahaha dis a fav

2DAMNREAL..A.K...

11/17/08 (01:59 PM)

yes queen keep writting u have a gift and a talent....keep it up...

stayfocus3d

10/19/08 (11:14 PM)

n keep doing it...

mz_April

10/06/08 (02:36 PM)

i really like this write the flow is sikk duu keep ya pen hand strong yo