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"I wrote me a poem"
  by poetic rymes
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I wrote me a poem yesterday
Released all my revalations and thoughts
I wrote me a poem yesterday
and talked about all my achievements and faults
I wrote me a poem yesterday
trying to hide the pain
I wrote me a poem yesterday
hopeing I’d find something to gain
I wrote me a poem yesterday
To fight back the tears
I wrote me a poem yesterday
to contain all my hidden fears
time after time
My mother told me nothing would ever come from writing
these rhymes
My father critisized who I was and everything I stood for
But I’m here now and ready to settle the score
I’m misunderstood in every way possible
every day I battle my inner obstacles
By picking up this pen and letting these words go
not stopping until I’m satisfied with my flow
I wrote me a poem yesterday
Because it made me feel good
I wrote me a poem yesterday
Because I knew I should
You see I wrote me a poem yesterday
and I’ll write one today and tomorrow
because thats how i relieve my sorrow
I’ve been writing poems since before my birth
And I will continue to write until my last day on this earth
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Date Submitted: Apr 12, 2008 (02:07 AM)
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  big josh
03/17/09 (07:01 PM) 
nice write hommie

  LadyMay16
11/12/08 (10:29 PM) 
Continue writing a poem...if it doesn't do a thing for you it will definetly help another soul. Keep ya pen moving poet.

  --->QUEENPIN O...
08/26/08 (10:22 PM) 
My mother told me nothing would ever come from writing these rhymes My father critisized who I was and everything I stood for<----*tears* this pains me...i know i would support my kids in whatever they wanted to do...especially writing...i dont see how ur parents couldnt support u...that really pisses me off...keep ur head up though...u know ur talented and who gives a fuck if they think u should write...dont ever let that pen stop moving!

  A.Renee
06/23/08 (07:03 PM) 
i'm lovin dis, i feelin this so hard, keep it up, i aslo enjoyed this mos def a 10

  AfricanBlack
05/27/08 (04:59 PM) 
My Brotha keep the pen flowing, I enjoyed this piece...

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