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"i.b.--the spitter--"
  by imperfect beauTy


i.be.



an ostentatious thinker,
an overtly over analyzer

through poetic prophecy
i.be. a bic pen paralyzer

through infinite evocative ink
i.be. an emotion energizer

working out words so wistfully wonderful
i.be. a verbal exerciser

a dame who's rightfully acclaimed
i.be. a supreme dictionist

once my erotic inks exacted
i.be. a lyrical exhibitionist


there is so fuckin much on i.b.'s mind
ok .....reeeewiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnddddd



call it vertigo of the verbals
as words reach to regain their balance

label it tantric style linguistics
as i test my lyrical talents

gymnastics of conjunctions
watch me flip many a' script

seamstress of synonyms
stitch back together the scribe i ripped


-=lawda'mercy y'all....forgive me...i'b.'s on some cocky shit=-

acrobatics of antonyms
have 'em swinging across the pages

can make millions off my mind
while other rhymes be barely worth minimum wages

.....
so supremely slick, in the shit i spit
you'd swear my mouth was

-well oiled, call my lips,lubricated-

emeril lagase, so just watch me
chef up scrumptious stanzas

-"mMm this dish is delicious, i.b. MUST'VE made it"-
.....

don't take offense if i call you a mu'fucka
after all, i.b.'s your favorite m.i.l.f.

birthed in the dutty ass BX
so naturally. my flows full of filth

i shall forever stay
pushing- the -envelope

'cause
i.be.
so astronomically dope


am i done?
NOPE



ok
ready to switch up the tempo???

lets go!



don't you dare
even try it
do not attempt
to ever deny it
in one word
my inks a "riot"
rebel tendencies
call my lead defiant
don't ever
be sadly mistaken
by my
luxurious articulation
don't get my demeanor
misconstrued
a thoroughbred is who i.be.
ya dig, my dude?


you think that just because i pen a pretty poem

thats all there is to me???


you have NO IDEA


exactly


who

i.be.






multi-

f a c e t e d

pen so

p a s s i o n a t e


a poetic

heavy h.i.t.t.e.r


i am i.b.







i have just granted you a glimpse into my alter ego as a s.p.i.t.t.e.r .












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Date Submitted: Dec 15, 2007 (02:14 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 01/20/08 (12:39 AM)
Author: imperfect beauTy
Poem Title: i.b.--still spittin'--

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comment icon  COMMENTS (17)
  S.O.G.
02/01/08 (07:15 AM) 
u b spittin hard on in all ya writes, and u wuz spiitin hard as fuck on this one, the degrees of the heated up poem was making my computer screen melt, i burned my fingers trying to type in this comment, u brought the heat my fellow poet

  --->QUEENPIN O...
12/29/07 (01:50 AM) 
GIRL....I LOVE THIS PIECE...DAMN...I'M STILL TRIPPIN ON THE BEAUTIFUL MAYHEM UR PEN SCRIBED...PLEASE TEACH ME!!! LOL

  --->QUEENPIN O...
12/17/07 (03:43 PM) 
FUCK, FUCK, FUCK!!!!!! OKAY 2 LINES THAT REALLY STOOD OUT...seamstress of synonyms stitch back together the scribe i ripped <---- THAT IS THE TYPE OF SHIT WHEN U LOOK AT UR PEN AND THROW IT ACROSS THE ROOM BECAUSE U AINT THINK OF THE SHIT 1ST...LIKE IT WAS THE PENS FAULT...SICK!!! AND THEN "don't take offense if i call you a mu'fucka after all, i.b.'s your favorite m.i.l.f." I DAMN NEAR PEED ON MYSELF WHEN I READ THAT...LMAO...THIS WAS TIGHT...A FAV

  piss a mofo of...
12/16/07 (05:55 PM) 
Brought the fire like Johnny Blaze was in the building himself!!!...whewwwww Ma, you put your style and class on this scribe but also ripped it lyrically in a way i've not ever heard from you...masterfully molded masterpiece Ma!!!!

  unforgivenange...
12/16/07 (04:37 PM) 
well this was a tight write... love the flow, and how you just put it right out there.. great write... :)

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