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"Ice Queen..."
  by PanthaG


gets easier

to push those

things away

thoughts flashback

gone astray

don;t want

to get close

don;t try

to touch the surface

it's a dead end

street

car crash collision

to my brick wall

Smash!

bent iron steel

jawline in the dash

it don;t matter

I could show

you my cold

emotions may surface

but deep down

this igloo

never melts

so good luck

I really wish you the best

trying to get

a trace of my heart

I'll give you

a hint

go dig in

that ditch

over there

maybe

you'll find it...



no really...

I mean it

Good luck!
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Date Submitted: Nov 23, 2008 (09:53 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 12/07/08 (10:51 PM)
Author: l0nnieugene
Poem Title: Ice Cream

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comment icon  COMMENTS (5)
  Snugasaglove (...
12/07/08 (11:00 PM) 
Well, shit!...I'll just take my number and stand in line behind you!

  BlessedOne
11/24/08 (07:27 PM) 
Wow...I'll give you a hint go dig in that ditch over there maybe you'll find it! Just a vacantcy...Love don't live here anymore (Rose Royce).

  Rissa14
11/24/08 (06:50 PM) 
dagg yoo. this is really sadd. especially the part where u sad you was going to give that person a hint to go find your heart..and you said it was in that ditch. wow. real talk.thats sad though. i feel you. this piece is perfect for the mood im feeling right now, and the mood that ive been feeling alot lately. ten stars and a favorite sis. lovee you always. xoxo ♥Rissa

  Syndel
11/24/08 (06:13 AM) 
I totally understand this feeling I have been there and although time is suppose to heal the shell around my heart will be a tough nut to crack

  butterscotch
11/24/08 (01:30 AM) 
Wow is this a message to someone in particular.. Wom ever he maybe he might want to thinktwicw or really pou on some serious affection so maybe he can reheat that frozen heart and allow you to be happy and complete with your soulmate. This poem and the others have been moments of you releasing soem very vital information to the world. I hope that you can find the fire to melt away all the ice and allow you to resurface as the beautiful spirit I see in you. Love this write also, Your Biggest Fan,...
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