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"I'd.........................."
  by floatingontheverb


Trust undresses layered regret of holding pride
Precious jewel emerald green smoking over slinky skills that slide
Out of trust that your trust thought could confide
In and through all misguided answers that leave breath constricted and life hogtied
Although the factors of trust are never truly as described
I allow the defeat to stay holding the crown of the stone wall surrounding the castle in which I preside
At the aching split of letting go I stretch the divide
Of sunset from sunrise to the dew and fog that broken emotions provide
Suffocate what could’ve been and devour useless pride
Undressed and unzipped moments that hold fascination in the touch that implied
A long awaited kiss that’s ready to flow like a soft current through a seaside
Of what time and dividing it will allow motion to decide
I’d

Rather represent all the colors of change that stains white borrowed t-shirts tie-dyed
I’d

Be dishonest if the path of bursting summer hasn’t already existed and strongly died
I’d

Say it’s easy to recline on all the comfortable notions of where stability and predictable touches reside
I’d

Understand if your hands that were tied around me over time tend to slip out of love that never stayed in what I felt I needed to hide
Ignoring all the interesting things that are important to feel never ceasing to open your eyes that drown outside

I’d
Glide
Beauty swallowing dancing in my eyes that worn out shoes beat in my stride

I’d
Glide
Down regret and past everything that should’ve been gone before true heartbreak applied

To memories that slide
I’d

Erase some but keep the memories I’d rather share
Than hide

I’d
Flow like the tide
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Date Submitted: Nov 06, 2009 (05:42 PM)
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  kahkah
11/12/09 (03:15 PM) 
your flow is simply raw. love it.

  tngrl
11/08/09 (12:48 PM) 
okay... ima be honest... your writing is a lil over my head but this one... i LOVED.. especially the line which read 'Rather represent all the colors of change that stains white borrowed t-shirts tie-dyed' idk what it was but that jus got my attention! loved this one angel!

  Variator
11/08/09 (12:22 PM) 
i gotta put this one on my fav list for sure."Beauty swallowing dancing in my eyes that worn out shoes beat in my stride" geez man-sikk

  Tiku
11/07/09 (10:30 PM) 
A different type and interesting.touches my heart.very nice.move on.

  Sunkissed25
11/06/09 (05:57 PM) 
your writing is like nothing i've come into contact with...its fantastic poet....inspiring.

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