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"If ever"
A Ghost_writa and smurphqueen18 Collaboration


  Ghost_writa:

If i ever lubricate your eyes
And make you fix ur face to say you hate me
Kill me where i stand
and let the good Lord come take me
Cause i don't derserve
to live in a world
That would strip me from
my babygurl

  smurphqueen18:

If i ever question your moves,
or ever utter words that makes our doom,
Ignore my words,
being without u is sumthin unheard.
Uve been here so long its like your a fixture,
my heart n place of my mind, became a mixture.
My yin 2 my yang, my heart 2 ur heart,
don't wanna b away or never part.

  Ghost_writa:

If i ever fall asleep
wit out sayin i love you
It will be because
i just kissed and hugged you
And you in arms length
where i can wake and nudge you
Then you wake
and i love you
(gently)

  smurphqueen18:

If i ever steal ur fav shirt 2 wear 2 bed,
don't take it from mi, jus put mi 2 bed.
Make mi ur wifey & love mi 4eva,
ne 1 take mi from ur love neva.
Body next 2 mi whisperin the truth,
mi respondin sayin wat i wanna do 2 u.
Dreams flowing only wit faces of u,
my hearts urs i'll always stay true.

  Ghost_writa:

If i ever
act like a ass
Treat me like one
and spank me for the laughs
Cause i be trippin, so my stupidity
lets use as gas
And keep This Thing runnin
and make it last
Cause forever i said
so forever it'll be
not as you and me
but as us and we

  smurphqueen18:

If I ever, make u think i'd leave u 4 give mi,
wen i said i miss u & love u, dat was honestly.
My heart and joy,
my grown baby boy.
My body i give 2 u,\
my heart is 4 u.
But wen u act lik imma stray,
i wanna hit u 4 thinkin dat way.
Im yours! IM YOURS! u should get it,
y don't u get it?
Don't i show u? i give u my heart,
every little piece and part.

  Ghost_writa:

If ever
If ever
Leave you
i'll never
You are my angel
so lets fly together
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Date Submitted: Oct 17, 2008 (01:03 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 10/17/08 (01:23 AM)
Author: Blood Rose
Poem Title: When Eva

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comment icon  COMMENTS (2)
  L18
10/17/08 (01:11 AM) 
Speechless! Absolutely speechless! aaawwww! NOW COME ON! YA KNOW THIS IS NOTHIN BUT LOVE RIGHT HERE! THIS WAS ROMANTIC, IT WAS SEXY, IT WAS HEART-FELT, IT WAS MIND BLOWING, HEART-MELTING LOVE...DAMN THIS WAS EXCELLENT. 10 STARZ BOTH OF U. NOW DIDNT I SAY I WAS SPEECHLESS? lol. Much luv u too. *Smooches*

  Blood Rose
10/17/08 (01:10 AM) 
Nice ya......Good job.....I like dis...in fact ima fav it......and i give it 10 starz 4 the love u both express

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