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"if he knew"
  by ok


In his eyes
I see a plethora of emotions
I find a fear of gazing
in them because they may
lack love and devotion
His voice filled
with such power
His heart is filled with pain
I would gaze in his eyes for hours
I he knew i felt the same
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Date Submitted: Sep 20, 2008 (12:05 PM)
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  pozeup
10/06/08 (01:18 AM) 
Short and HOT ! to the point. I am feeeling this one. 10 stars !

  Don Lui
10/02/08 (01:17 AM) 
Brilliance defines this short write ... You follow an important key of being a poet which Booker t Washington says "For every word Give a thought" and you truly accomplish that

  me-me
10/01/08 (10:58 PM) 
the message is clear in this short sweet and to the point write loved it

  Juicy1on1
09/20/08 (12:45 PM) 
I love the message here. Nice piece.

  Just Me...
09/20/08 (12:12 PM) 
Awwww. Sweet. :)

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