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"If I could fly away!"
  by Loco T


If I could fly away!
And never return would I be missed?
If I could turn around and see my friends and family for the last time and speak my last words, would they cry?
If I could fly away!
And never return, would they think of me when they need me to make them smile once more?
Would they want me to tell another crazy joke to make them laugh?
Or even wipe their tears when their sad?
Would they want me around to help them out with their problems and give them advice?
Would my brothers miss me starting agruments with them or the times when I made them laugh until they cried?
Would my mom miss my silliness?
When I use to walk around the house acting goofy and doing my silly dances!
Would my boyfriend miss the times when I would be in his arms?
Or would he miss the late nights when we use to laugh and tell jokes on the phone and fall to sleep on the phone at 2 in the morning.
What If I could fly away and never return?????
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Date Submitted: Jul 24, 2008 (01:04 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (2)
Date: 08/06/08 (11:14 AM)
Author: Tanisha13
Poem Title: memories

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  ASympl3Diamond
08/08/08 (02:26 AM) 
"If I could turn around and see my friends and family for the last time and speak my last words, would they cry? If I could fly away! And never return, would they think of me when they need me to make them smile once more? Would they want me to tell another crazy joke to make them laugh? Or even wipe their tears when their sad? Would they want me around to help them out with their problems and give them advice"---i constantly think about that same shit

  Kat Nicole
08/06/08 (11:25 PM) 
i often wish i was born with wings.. to allow me to fly at any given moment.. to flee from current reality just to see what will happen next.. who would mourn..who would cheer.. just to have the ability to see truth in people from the skies about.. i really like this piece... keep writing.. 10 starzz - Kat

  L2P
08/06/08 (08:05 PM) 
im feeling it

  TRU-IN-DEED
08/04/08 (11:40 AM) 
I am really really feeling this concept. kinda gets the mind working a bit. You expressed your thoughts creatively nice drop. - T.I.D.

  Sum-Thyng Like...
07/30/08 (01:25 PM) 
i don't know u but i would miss you :) nicely done lady

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