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"If I Die Before I Awake"
  by Nilla


if i die before i awake,
i'd like you to know that you made my whole world shake.
you captured my heart,
pieced a torn apart
me right back together.
provided me with shelter through the weather.
there was never
a better
man that walked into my life.
and i'm only sorry that i couldn't become your wife.
that i couldn't start that family with you.
but in me lays no regret because i know that you saw me as a backbone, as a provider of love, and you knew i stood witchu you thru everything you saw fit to do.
if i make it to heaven, to roam the streets of gold
let it be known that God be told
there's only one spot i want reserved.
and know i'd do anything in my power to let it be known it was well deserved.
but i think he'd know =) because, see, he made you and i
and he didn't have to try
to capture us in one another's light
because together we shined so bright.
as not one but two individuals with love in their emotional make up's.
if i should die before i awake, know that, no matter how tough
things got - there was never a minute that i didn't love you more each day.
and if i die before i awake, hold me in your arms, keep me in your heart, because that'd be forever where my soul would love to lay.
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Date Submitted: Aug 21, 2009 (02:47 PM)
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  Nikkz iZ DONE....
10/09/09 (03:01 PM) 
BEAUTiFUL Nii` Baby..."and you knew i stood witchu you thru everything you saw fit to do" definately there with u on that

  MzFyne_N_Bless...
08/31/09 (02:00 AM) 
"and if i die before i awake, hold me in your arms, keep me in your heart, because that'd be forever where my soul would love to lay." This line really captured my heart...very heartfelt, of course. This message is different, its very open-minded cause not alot of people talk like this today. I like this write. 10 starz.

  J3LLYB3AN
08/28/09 (11:25 AM) 
this was hella sweet nillsz.. definitely love, true love at that.. (:

  Shadow
08/21/09 (07:56 PM) 
awwww this was incredibly heartwarming and sweet. lovely write Nillz. =)

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