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"If I die today ……………"
  by Syndel


I know what pain felt like
As you washed it away with your tears

If I die today ……………..
I know what hurt felt like
For thru you I have experienced joy

If I die today ………….
My sorrows would be put into a box
The key thrown away replaced by your smile

The seasons would come to a halt
Confusion with in the leaves and clouds
Struggle of snow an rain
Not sun just darkness
My biggest loss
Should I die today ……….
Would be the love I would not see
Thru the eyes that first loved me

So if I died today …….it would not be in fear
It would not be in pain , It would not be in struggle
Or strive I would not go out fighting

It would simply be as I close my eyes
The knowledge that you loved me Unconditionally

My Life Is In Your Hands - Kirk Franklin
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Date Submitted: Aug 17, 2008 (09:11 PM)
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  Stiicky
11/30/08 (05:28 PM) 
wow, this is beautiful

  lips.of.an.ang...
10/04/08 (07:35 AM) 
woooow i really loved it ,, i just love how u made something as terrifiying as death into somthing that is simple & re;axing ,, keep it up ;)

  shaybaby69
08/28/08 (10:38 AM) 
dang miss lady this got me a lil choked up alot of people talk about they will go out fighting i have yet to find alot of people who will say what you did and just closer your eyes..the kirk franklin sent this home much respect and love

  dread357_14
08/27/08 (11:55 AM) 
HERE WE ARE WITH ANOTHER WINNER KEEP IT REALISTIC

  poetic rymes
08/22/08 (05:32 PM) 
Im 100 percent with mindigoblue on this 1! def a favorite and a piece to remember keep it up!

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