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"If I Was"
  by *!DymeDuchess!*


If i was here to please the unknown
to be molded from its stone
to match the unknown tone
to in infatuation im prone
but i wont
If i was who u wanted me to be, a saint
i would be your perfection clear of a complaint
to move when u move to me a restraint
to speak when told until faint
but i aint
if i was somebody you may want to control
to be in a postion that u might mold
to put in me your created soul
if my flaws u erased to make be be whole
mine wont be stole
If i was here to make a million smile
If i was here to stop a million cries
If i was here to satisfy eyes
If i was here to tighten ties
if i was here to be wisdom to wise
who i would be to myself
which card has been dealt
to never know how i felt
if i was
(dyme Duchess___out)
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Date Submitted: Aug 09, 2007 (12:03 PM)
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  PoeticNupe
12/11/08 (12:17 AM) 
THOUGH PROVOKING...this is beautiful..that's all i can say...keep writing..10 stars

  poetriboi
11/19/08 (12:46 PM) 
Damn.. i think you opened me up on this 1.. you got talent

  DEEP THOUGHT
11/02/08 (02:26 PM) 
THIS IS REAL TALK LOVE IT 10 ALL DAAAAYYYYY

  trill~trill
10/15/08 (04:11 PM) 
dame gril this sweet

  GS Soulja
10/14/08 (04:47 PM) 
aye ma..i just want you to know dat this is one of the best poems ive read..and its one of my favorites..u get 10 stars fasho..loved it from beginning to end..keep doin ya thing im diggin ya steez shorty.

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