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"If i was my gurl"
  by Shane Polo


if i was my girl
id probably understand
how it feels to love me the way she does
and know that im still in love with someone else

if i was my girl
wudd i b able 2 tell it so obviously?
would i notice how much im quiet on the phone
as if im thinkin to myself
or the way i bring up my ex

if i was my girl
wudd i cry the way she tells me she does sometimes?
would i b cryin over me?
or are those excuses...excuses?

if i was my girl
id try to understand
so that i could leave
before it got out of hand

i wish i was my girl
so i could know how it hurts
so i can appreciate the love she gives me

i wish i was my gurl
so i can understand the let downs she has had in her life
so i can appreciate the sunshine beamin through her smile
shinin into those gray skies
showin that rainbow i hear you see
when all the rain is done

i wish i was my girl
so i could build the strength in her mind
and weaken the suffocating waiting-to-burst pain in her heart
so she can realize
she needs 2 let me go..
to save herself a heartbreak
and save me a hard decision

i wish i was my girl sometimes
just so i can save my girl
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Date Submitted: Oct 14, 2008 (11:13 PM)
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  Lilmizz718
10/27/08 (02:32 PM) 
damn real deep...this one was like someting u read twice to really understand it..nd thats good...we can tell u dnt want to hurt her..but if u stay nd cheat it will hurt her more..nd it will also hurt u..but yea dis raw...feelin it..

  Land Roving
10/19/08 (08:05 PM) 
Nice yo I really like this this is deep!! Keep doin your thing!!

  ash_g
10/17/08 (04:36 PM) 
awh..this is sweet...i REALLY dig this one....i'ma have my girl to read it.=) *****10*****

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