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"If I Was you..."
  by Young Street Poet
  - This Poem is a response to the poem i need your advice by ash_g


You're definitely in a complicated situation sweetie
You know that there is nothing about this that is easy
You love him, The question is does he love you
And do you stay in contact with the one in jail too?
Who would treat you better and love you unconditionally
I wouldn't be in a relationship where all I did was fight, that's not meant for me
Obviously you must have a stronger heart than I
If I was in your shoes I wouldn't know how to mentally survive
You said the guy in jail gets out soon
Do you have arrangements with this fellow to come see you
I think you should stay in contact with him but let him know the situation
Be honest and stay 100, and don't put yourself in a fucked up situation
You deserve better than you are currently being treated
And I know you do because you wouldn't ask for help unless you needed it
So if you have anymore questions or problems
Just send another poem response and we'll figure out how to solve them...

Nice Chattin Wit You....
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Date Submitted: Oct 06, 2008 (04:00 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 10/06/08 (05:28 PM)
Author: ash_g
Poem Title: appreciated

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comment icon  COMMENTS (3)
  danceluv
10/07/08 (08:39 AM) 
awwww very cute....ten

  ash_g
10/06/08 (05:13 PM) 
=) thanks

  mz_April
10/06/08 (04:29 PM) 
aww you helpin homie girl thats whuts up cause she wont listen to me lol j/k but this is a good write hubby =]

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