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"If I Were"
  by David Wilson
  - This Poem is a response to the poem If I Were Music by Arcane


If I were…

If I were a artist
I would draw you
Capture all the beauty
And essence that surrounds you
All the wonderful things I see within you

If I were a musician
I would compose a piece just for you
Expressing all the emotions that
I truly feel for you

If I were and writer
I would put together
Words and phrases
That describe your
Intelligence thoughtfulness
And perhaps your eagerness
To please

If I were a photographer
I would take a thousand pictures
Of just you
Since 1 pictures = a thousands words
I just topped the writer

If I were a metaphoric poet
I would compare your beauty
To the sun and the moon
And the stars above and
I would speak of rain showers
And spring flowers

But…

What I am is your Husband…

I will take care of your needs
Mentally emotionally sexually
No matter what the deed

I will protect you
Respect you
And lay my life down for you

I will…
Unconditionally
Completely
And Endlessly
LOVE YOU
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Date Submitted: Oct 09, 2008 (03:45 PM)
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  *Miss Toya*
10/10/08 (02:10 PM) 
you killed this...."If I were a photographer I would take a thousand pictures Of just you Since 1 pictures = a thousands words I just topped the writer" wow...love that stanza....thoroughly enjoyed this joint....

  Sum-Thyng Like...
10/09/08 (09:54 PM) 
nicely did

  Esoteric
10/09/08 (06:14 PM) 
THAT'S WHATS UP BRUH!!!! I can relate to this and the ending.....maaaaan. I feel you!!! Represent for ya wife dude. Much respect!

  guttalova
10/09/08 (06:08 PM) 
aw know this is the kind of poem every girl wnts to hear. many blessings to you and yours

  Dopeboyfresh
10/09/08 (04:08 PM) 
Yeah you took this to a whole other place. Love the "But" and everything after the best.

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