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"...If I Were Poetry..."
  by *Miss Toya*
  - This Poem is a response to the poem If I were Poetry by ۞ F1 Wesley



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If I were poetry...
.
.
.
I'd be written...
Upon the lines...
Of your hand...
.
So you could feel..
Just where I'm coming from...
And without question...
You'd understand...
.
My content...
.
Knowing what i meant...
Before each word...
Even formed a sentence...
.
If I were poetry
I'd be a sonnet...
Seeking solace...
Through literal repentance...
.
.
I'd apologize...
If I were poetry...
.
Poetically speaking...
Within a verse...
.
I'd .write. my wrongs...
To the rhythm of your song...
Combating my hate...
And harbored hurt...
.
And for what it's worth...
.
If I were poetry...
.
I'd let you read me...
Line for line...
.
No metaphorical bloating...
Or metaphysical gloating...
You could probe my thoughts...
And quote my mind...
.
Lines don't just rhyme...
They have deeper meaning...
.
If I were poetry...
Pens would be bleeding...
.
My pain...
.
Happiness...
.
And contentment...
.
.
.
If I were poetry...
I'd show my commitment...
.
To being your friend...
.
Never letting you write alone...
.
If I were poetry...
I'd give your ink a home...
.
But I'm just me...
Poetry is what i recite...
.
But If I were poetry...
I'd give my life...
.
.
.
To your trees...
.
.
.

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Date Submitted: Oct 30, 2009 (07:32 PM)
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  Blood Rose
11/13/09 (04:29 PM) 
I like this times 100

  MAVRICK
11/10/09 (09:58 AM) 
Ohh damn!..This was a beautiful concept, well thought of and written out...You are poetry and you definitely do all that you scribed in this piece...

  JaZzipOo
11/07/09 (09:19 PM) 
this poem was tight, i loved it. It seems like u are really connected to your poetry, poetry is life and it seems like u made it urs. Good job

  UnMasked
11/02/09 (07:22 PM) 
awwwww perfect response enjoyed the creativity... this was like the completion to f1 wesley's write ultra kudos for both poems

  *Jazique*
11/01/09 (01:57 PM) 
*sigh* you express exactly what poetry is, and I would love to be poetry myself...I would quote a line, but honestly I think that every line in this write was amazing...I love how you structured this....and the bg fits well...

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