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"IF"
  by A.C.H.


There were times when you opened your heart;
now you let all your relationships fall apart.
There were times when you trusted men;
working hard in the relationships you were in.
What caused this sudden change of heart?
Was it someone who broke your heart?
Tell me this I wish to know;
who would dare to hurt you so?
This man cannot be me;
for every time we are together you're happy.
For we are friends but I want more;
only the future knows what is in store.
If you give me just one chance;
I would show you romance.
To let you know how much I care;
I would take you anywhere.
If you were mine I'd give you anything you could dream of;
but must of all I would give you love.
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Date Submitted: Jan 13, 2009 (07:36 PM)
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Date: 01/17/09 (02:44 PM)
Author: princess_kit
Poem Title: Please Understand

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  Lite
05/25/09 (11:44 PM) 
wow made me think ,you took me into the moment,this was nice poet,you really captured the hurting heart and teased the pleasureable soul with this one

  MR. BYRD
01/23/09 (09:53 PM) 
Ms. Smith is right on the dot when it comes to trusting someone to love again, that's when females generally would be the one who would be a little bittersweet due to their past...but some dudes do that as well....strong write..10

  Ms. Smith
01/18/09 (09:00 PM) 
It's hard accepting love again when you have been hurt...but I know it can also be hurtful on the other end, when you are giving love but there is none in return...or atleast the love you are looking for. great write.

  Princess_Kit
01/17/09 (02:18 PM) 
Some women (including myself) avoid certain feelings because they probably been hurt before... but we never think about how that affects that one true man that isnt getting the opportunity to prove he is real. i think this poem is a great way to open all the lady's eyes so they can be a little less gaurding and protective and more open.

  YuNeek
01/16/09 (06:40 PM) 
I agree with brwnsknpopn. This made me think about my "ex". Atleast you know that you both are always gonna be friends ya know. So if nothing happens more then that then like I said, there's still that frfiendship. =) Good write. Keep it up.

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