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"If Love Does Not Show"
  by TonySouthern
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Love, In Short by LiquidFire


Let it be known that I if I do show
I shall send a message through the moon
That shall be delivered by the sun
The message shall read
My planetarial quest has me beckoning to come
But if I do not show, just know
That we shall forever be one
I am, and you are my World.
As the stars trinkle across the skies so blue
And if I Love do not show
Will you still feel the same way about me
As I feel about you.
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Date Submitted: Sep 01, 2008 (09:39 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 09/01/08 (10:59 AM)
Author: LiquidFire
Poem Title: Yes, In Short

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comment icon  COMMENTS (10)
  1225
11/10/08 (04:15 PM) 
(lonly!) what a poem with dreams of the moon and the stars up above i love it this really was something to keep and love

  slimseductress...
09/18/08 (03:42 PM) 
short simple n sweet. love it

  Juicy1on1
09/17/08 (02:04 PM) 
THAT WAS BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN AND THE QUESTION AT THE END WAS VERY REAL. DEF A FAV.

  ~CHAY~
09/06/08 (01:49 PM) 
THIS WAS VERY SWEET SIMPLE BUT VERY SWEET

  K.Desiree
09/06/08 (11:53 AM) 
i like it. the simplicity of it.

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