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"If"
  by shantae


When I look in your eyes I can not deny , The feeling that

get makes me want to cry, Love is not the word for it, I

dont know if it's more or less tell me about it, Competing

with these hartaches and headaches, How can i be perfect

tell me what it takes? If it's true or not true will I still like

you? Or would I be mad turn around and get glad? And what

if you be near people you don't know and they start talking

about me would that make me a hoe? Having you is like a

gift I would never think you would hurt me but what if?
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Date Submitted: Jan 18, 2007 (04:30 PM)
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  Queen Campbell
10/17/07 (12:12 PM) 
Simple and sweet. Keep up the good work lady!

  williesidney
09/24/07 (05:01 PM) 
A well written write keep on doing what you are doing a big ten stars.

  YoungKing07
06/19/07 (09:07 AM) 
u got a nice flow and some skills miss keep it up

  doe boi
03/28/07 (06:20 PM) 
nice skillz ma

  Mizz Mafia Pri...
02/06/07 (05:18 PM) 
NICE LOVE POEM GIRL, I CAN SEE HOW U FEEL, BUT U CAN ONLY TRY THINGS OUT, IF U WANT AN ANSWER TO UR WAT IFS, 4 STARZ ON UR WRITE, IT WAS HOT

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