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"IF THIS BLOOD COULD SING"
  by KiNg-Go0B3r
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Silent Tears: If My Tears Could Talk pt 3 by XPERIENCE




*when beat kicks*

my drip drops to the tic like the toc and it sings

while my floe from the blow of the bullet to my soul makes my blood hum a mellody

i got a choir of suu wuu's in my nose being blow out singing opera in my tissue

no problem with the song but its keeps me up at night thats what is the issue

never resting always singing keeping me wide awake

never understand the heavy toll that it takes

on my body and my mind but never slows down my grind

may seem fine like wine but inside im slowly dying

come rain or shine my rhymes are multiplying

but my mind is slowing up mentally clogging

getting harder by the second to keep writing

sometimes i think about running away and hiding

till the songs of my blood come to a completely silence

damn i hear sirens is somebody dying oh damn thats me my heart starting to feel kind of violent its beating violently oh shit i cant breathe
the bloods thickening the notes are getting higher with the synthony
i'm receoving an epithany the worlds trying to get rid of me
one less suu wuu is like a one less sin to thee
i'll stand my ground a i set my feet no knees no dirt even if im deep six feet
nothing can hold me down i rise so phenominally
no pain no hurt no demon shall bother me
any obsticale in my way shall instantly fall to me
ears closed shut but the bloods keep calling me
solo for the last tear drop....let it fall with me
dead to the world like a corspe embombed
flat on the ground like my body got stomped
the sining has stopped and the album has dropped
SONGgS OF A SUU WUU see how many gets copped
while im locked in davey jowns locker smelling shitty socks
and my blood begins to sing again....but it'll never stop

REAPERS THOUGHTS:....can you hear it??
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Date Submitted: Sep 22, 2008 (08:10 PM)
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  Jody
09/22/08 (10:48 PM) 
lmao @ X.. even tho u messed up the chain... lol, I"m like we singing now? cuz I can't hold a note for nothing! lol, but I rapped this... and felt... never would of thought blood to be singing

  XPERIENCE
09/22/08 (08:51 PM) 
even though you MESSED UP THE CHAIN! loll this was still a nice concept..flow was on point here.... damn....blood singing

  ASympl3Diamond
09/22/08 (08:25 PM) 
"while im locked in davey jowns locker smelling shitty socks"---gooby why is you fronting for lmfao you know damn well thats really what your breath be smelling like then you suck on turd sticks lol

  Chainz.
09/22/08 (08:13 PM) 
this was off the chain my nigga dis was crazy flow fa realz 10 stars and a favorite haha

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