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"iF u OnLi kNew"
  by RENESHA


IF U ONLY KNEW THE WAY I FELT
I CARE ABOUT YOU MORE THAN ANYONE ELSE {LOL}
MY WORDS CANT EXPLAIN AS MUCH AS I CAN SHOW
BUT HOW CAN I LET YOU KNOW
IF YOU ARENT BY MY SIDE WHEN I NEED YOU THE MOST
MY LOVE FOR YOU IS FOREVER TIL THE END
BUT I CANT DO THIS IF YOU NOT GON' MAKE TIME FOR ME SO I CAN SEE THAT
U TRUELY WANNA BE WIT ME
CUZ FAR AS I SEE THERE WILL BE NO MORE U N ME
CUZ I WONT WAIT FOR YOU
EVEN THO I REALLY DO LOVE YOU
BUT I FEEL AS IF IM WASTING MY TIME
TRYNA SEE ABOUT YOU
I CAN BE WIT SOMEBODY ELSE THAT CAN DO ME BETTER THAN YOU DO
SO REALLY ALL THERE IS LEFT TO SAY IS GET IT TOGETHER BEFORE YOU BE
REPLACED
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Date Submitted: Jul 16, 2008 (03:27 PM)
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  texascity
07/17/08 (02:35 PM) 
thats truth right there. don't wait for someone to make u happy. i liked this!

  DOMINICANPOET
07/17/08 (02:27 PM) 
this is a hot piece loved it ten from me

  Haley B
07/17/08 (12:31 AM) 
I like it how you just put it out there. 10 stars

  Living Legend ...
07/16/08 (08:44 PM) 
WOW MA YOU SHOWED HELLA EMOTIONS ON THIS WRITE. I LOVED IT 10 STARS FROM ME. CHECK OUT A FEW OF MY WRITES

  koolaiid
07/16/08 (08:14 PM) 
yea gurl TELL EM! u not fenna wait around for nobody! GO GURL!! i like this! =]

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