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"If You Are Only A Mirror"
  by mstwest
  - This Poem is a response to the poem I am only a mirror by jdubbya3


If you are just A mirror

You asked me , why don't I love you.
And I ask you why do you love me?
Cause there is nuthing beautiful about the reflection i see.

My smile is crooked and worn,
My eyes are blood shot red,
And my voice speaks from a soul that's dead.

If your just a mirror...

Why lie to me telling me i'm pretty,
When I know that i'm the ugliest girl in this city.
Why do i even bother looking at you everyday?
When I already know what your going to say.

your beautiful, your bad
your sexy, your sincere
And yes I love you my dear.

I didn't forget to love you
I just choose not to
Cause I don't even love myself
So how can I love you.

And the funny thing is, I can see my reflection
Just not the one you see.
Cause the one I see
is the real reflection of me.
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Date Submitted: Jun 29, 2008 (07:41 AM)
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  ArieeLondon
09/14/08 (09:08 AM) 
this is very different.yet deep=]

  ~Yung Msz~
09/11/08 (09:10 PM) 
gryl this is spectacular...i love the word plot!! I love the reflections thing!!

  lil.p
09/11/08 (07:17 PM) 
You shouldn't think about what people say about you because your not going to anwser to anyone by the end of the day but you also looks very pretty to me and you a 10 inmy book. very deep in this on....

  REALKISSES
09/11/08 (07:10 PM) 
VERY DEEP AND POWERFUL WRITE EXPRESSED YOUR FEELINGS WELL AND DEF FULL OF EMOTIONS A TEN

  sweet tee a.k....
09/11/08 (07:04 PM) 
this is a nice poem i likes this is deep

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