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"IF YOU GIVE ME ONE NIGHT (I WILL GIVE YOU TOMORROW)"
  by K.A.S. THE LYRICAL GANGSTER
  - This Poem is a response to the poem ...I Can Give You Tonight... by *Miss Toya*


One night will be the beginning
the first building block
the cornerstone of our life together
building a pyramid of love
initiating the destruction of loneliness
setting in motion the construction of a passion filled eternity
building on forever
*

In one night
I will stroke gently your core
touching the deepest part of your center
eruptions will overflow
tracing our path through infinity
*
In one poetically inspired night
a poet & poetess will make love in between the lines
we’ll become stanzas and verses
rewriting our world using the desire to love
to create love
beyond the use of pens and ink
ecstatic poetry will saturate page after page
as our poem of love and life together unfolds
*

In one night
I'll experience your warmest pleasure
plunging in deeply but totally
accepting the commitment
you share with me
in this our opening night to love that bonds us
in one lifetime
for all time
you will be my most valuable treasure
*
I'll make love to you in one night of love making
giving you love that will last throughout and beyond
this journey of togetherness we're taking
*
In one night
I can see that your fragile heart has survived
through more scars than it should have had to
beautiful on the outside
inside bruised and battered but still managing to love hard
with slow tender strokes I will kiss and caress you
massaging away the hurtful cuts of past lovers' blade
*
In one night
i will demonstrate unrestricted length in patience
in exploring the depths of your devotion
we’ll begin anew sinking into each other
treading the waters of passion with shared trust
mentally we’ll stay afloat euphoric waves
physically staying anchored to one another
never drifting apart in separate ways
*
If you can give me one night
I will give you tomorrow







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Date Submitted: Oct 30, 2009 (08:49 AM)
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  *Miss Toya*
11/09/09 (09:11 PM) 
mmmm...see i had to read this one again...your ink makes me feel love in a world where i don't think it exists for me...your pad gives me that kiss on the forehead i long to feel at night and your pen tucks me in and then holds me all night long...helping me to dream for a love like you've written out....*sighs* from poetess to poet...i love you :).. your scribes have comforted my heart on many nights...tonight is one of them...:) thanks love, nite nite :)

  *Miss Toya*
10/30/09 (11:01 AM) 
all i could say while reading this was "omg yes*...over and over again your pen gives me chills k.a.s....stroking me the .write. way every single time...with not one spot missed...this is why i love you...my poetic pen pal...*wink* the third and 4th stanzas took me through it...i love this response k.a.s. and you know how i feel about poetry...coming from you to me...this was perfect in every way possible...a fav...on and off the sheets :)

  Athena317
10/30/09 (09:38 AM) 
oh my goodness.... it's 9:30 am and I'm now slow grindin in my head... miles away from work! silky smooth darlin!

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