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"If You Were (In My Shoes)"
  by Isis sun


You couldn't fit my shoes
Confiding in me
With unrelentless blasphemy
We
Produced
Two
And yet you think
I'm "too weak"
For three
Please...
Being a woman
Made me exempt
From
I can't connotations--
Thinking after my
Demonstrations of
Fearlessness..
You'd change..
Instead..
You said
My heart wasn't
Strong enough
To tread
These low percentages..
Some beg to differ
Believing in
Miracles manifested
Through hope
They've vested
In me...
She's coming in
8 weeks...
I think it's time
For you to
Believe.

em hotep



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Date Submitted: Sep 20, 2008 (11:27 PM)
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  lyric1985
09/23/08 (12:56 AM) 
u killed this piece,..it's sad this happens, but somehow ya get strength from the crazy things ya live thru...lovin the song....u spoke in multitudes to the masses...keep your head up ma... 10 from me xoxoxoxox lyric

  Juicy1on1
09/22/08 (12:54 PM) 
Very beautiful Isis and Good Luck!

  Red Dragon
09/21/08 (06:05 PM) 
Str8 fire you put together. This is another one of those poems where they just have to be soulcasted. Cuz I wanna hear you say this poem. Classic

  Kiyoko
09/21/08 (04:11 PM) 
Congratulations sista, I have two myself. Children are a joy and they are also proof of "Our" Strength. Blessings to you and yours 1Lv

  mindigoblue
09/21/08 (01:19 PM) 
This gave me chills. This speaks of such strength and determination. You spoke volumes when you said "Please... Being a woman Made me exempt From I can't connotations--" speak! This is nothing but the truth. It's sad that you would even have to make this statement as our day to day endeavors provide more than enough proof that we don't put into practice those words. This was a joy to read.

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