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"If your walls could talk."
  by SpitFire
  - This Poem is a response to the poem If your walls could talk by Poohbabi2010


If your walls could speak.
Would they say how far I've reached.
Would they say that I go deep.
Would they tell how good it feels for me to touch them.
Or would they complain that I'm kinda on the rough end.
Would they ask when is he "cumming" again....
and wait for the day.
Would they ask for a new coat of paint....
and for me to spray.
Would they say that I'm fearless and don't panic when they tighten around me.
I can honestly say that I love the surroundings.....
and the ambience is intoxicating.
If your walls could talk I wonder what would they be saying.
Would they be complaining or praising.
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Date Submitted: May 29, 2008 (12:45 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 05/29/08 (01:18 PM)
Author: Poohbabi2010
Poem Title: IF MY WALLS COULD TALK

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comment icon  COMMENTS (3)
  glo
05/29/08 (06:41 PM) 
that was sick, you my brother and i know you was i freak "wink wink" you know what i'm talkin about on that day that that thing happen lol, but you are on creative freak , nice writin 10 stars

  KiNg-Go0B3r
05/29/08 (05:39 PM) 
dayuum i see both yall got freakky with it doh das wassuu ya diig 10 starz like right off the back

  Prince of word...
05/29/08 (01:28 PM) 
this is hot im lvoen this series keep up the good work ^prince of words^

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