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"i'll love him forever"
  by acey


jelousey took a toll on my relationship
i never knew how i get can get so jelous
but when i split up what we had
i was glad but hours later i was said

he told me hes not in love with me but he still loves me
that broke a girl like me to her knees

i cant stop crying cause i want to hear his voice
and he tells me he still loves me
i knew he was very upset by to tone of his voice
i feel like i let love down and it hurts so bad.

what i did was uncalled for
i miss him so much
he was also like my best friend
but more than ever a stronger man

I didnt want to lose him for anyone else
I want him to know that I love him from the deepest part of my heart.
My love for him is unconditional.

I loved him yesterday
I love him today and
I'll love him forever
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Date Submitted: Nov 13, 2008 (07:09 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (2)
Date: 11/16/08 (05:58 PM)
Author: D-Niice Lyric
Poem Title: Time To Move On

Date: 11/14/08 (08:58 AM)
Author: muisq
Poem Title: i hear you

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  ONYX TREASURE
05/21/09 (09:37 PM) 
LOVING YOURSELF IS WHAT IS MOST IMPORTANT.YOU CAN NEVER REALLY LOVE SOME ONE UNTIL YOU KNOW AND LOVE YOURSELF. THINK ABOUT IT YOU DONT COOK WITHOUT TRYING OUT THE FOOD BEFORE YOU GIVE IT TO SOMEONE TO EAT. TRY YOURSELF FIRST BEFORE YOU GIVE YOURSELF TO SOMEONE. I KNOW HOW YOU FEEL AND IT IS HARD BUT IT IS SO WORTH THE FREEDOM

  Lique
12/08/08 (01:15 AM) 
i know how u feel bae...thank my sweet Jesus I can't lose my soulmate!!! =) all the fights just dont add up to a reason to separate...so i understand the love you have and i understand the loss when i even think hes gone...it rips my stomach and chest up

  dirtyRed
12/07/08 (11:14 PM) 
don't you just hate that, when you can't stop loving a man. i feel you on this piece. very emotional.

  *Miss Toya*
12/07/08 (07:51 PM) 
That line right there..."he told me he loves me but he's not in love with me" girl that will make anybody fall to their knees because it's a thin line with that....like you can love somebody all day...but are you in love with them is the question...I love your last stanza....perfect...

  Nikkii*3
12/07/08 (05:17 PM) 
Aw wow.. This is real sad... Lovved the poem though.. You expressed it well!! Keep it up. Ten stars easyy!

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