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"Illusional Journey"
  by WIZ


Traveling through this illusional plane
Of time and places that still remain

Flickering sounds of life once known
Lessons learned from seeds I've sown

As every fiber of my being
Maintain balance of what I'm seeing

Taking steps so bitter sweet
Of who I am and who I meet

Standing in the falling rain
Wing-like droplets call my name

Soaring through to wash away
Strands of life that must not stay

Leaving only truth behind
Of adventous journey's to what more I find

Exploring trails like never before
Opening doors and so much more

A journey well traveled from beginning to end
Back in touch with who I am

It's just Wiz your loyal friend!
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Date Submitted: Nov 28, 2008 (09:31 AM)
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  big josh
01/07/09 (06:03 PM) 
dat was a very good piece, I fuks wit it, 10s ma much luv

  jerl
12/11/08 (09:47 PM) 
Illusional journey is not good. I am glad you ended this like you did. It said to me that old adage, "To thine own self be true". The truth wills out, again. It may be fun to trick others but always stay true to yourself. You are over the top with this write, very good.

  Chainz.
12/10/08 (09:07 AM) 
damn i could picture dis poem u said it well described and it came out great 10 stars no doubt

  mikeb30
12/10/08 (07:35 AM) 
u have a style and flow tht i like..concept def had me in the moment..

  B3yond R3d3mpt...
12/05/08 (08:20 AM) 
I first off give u credit its hard to do a couplet n remain non cliche n u captured the essence of wha I strong poem shud b...n hopoe u hava gufd weekend also

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