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"Illusions of Pain"
  by AR-15


Peripheral vision, seeing the wounds of the past
The center of the brain holds the reasons why I am an outcast
I see without seeing, to me darkness is as clear as daylight
Blind, a night wing, a bat float across the skies of the battlegrounds
Where I never go without a fight
As I transform from bat to human form
I see it all again.. the rejections, the fears, the enemies, the tears
The sins I have committed, and have been forgiven for
But I have sinned once again, with every blink of the eye
Every ounce of breath, every inch of a step
I do unto others, what has been done to me
Because I sometimes have no control over my actions
My pain, is their pain
My turmoil is their turmoil
These dark illusions, never go away
Because new ones are created, each and every day
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Date Submitted: Oct 06, 2008 (12:25 AM)
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  Dimplez
10/20/08 (11:34 PM) 
dayum...i think im speechless, excellent flow right here man, you truely murdered this!

  ash_g
10/16/08 (01:39 PM) 
wow....this is deep right here...i loved this...i'm gonna have to start def. readin your writes...=D *****10*****

  D Benitez
10/06/08 (05:36 PM) 
"As I transform from bat to human form I see it all again.. the rejections, the fears, the enemies, the tears The sins I have committed, and have been forgiven for But I have sinned once again, with every blink of the eye Every ounce of breath, every inch of a step I do unto others, what has been done to me " As I transform from bat to human form I see it all again.. the rejections, the fears, the enemies, the tears The sins I have committed, and have been forgiven for But I hav...
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  NINO-G
10/06/08 (01:11 PM) 
Wow, man...not many can put these type of emotions into words like you did...much respected...nice scribe

  Shy Gyrl
10/06/08 (03:03 AM) 
o wow man this piece reminded me of a comic book scene...liked the way u put that pain and animalistic character to it.

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