Scriptz!!! ur words r unmatched maybe u should paid for doing this lol but serioulsy this one i liked to deep emotion of calm when i read ur stuff n this one is another masterpiece
I shall say it again, exquisite! I read this over and i still feel that the 'death' in this write interprets as the eventual unveiling of truths [?]. Indeed, the question still stands. I like how this piece allows one to search it from different angles to see in what other ways it could possibly interpret.. and i must say, there are many thoughts. Perhaps they differ from reader to reader, but the aforementioned notion was strongest.
""images of dream-like beliefs flutter behind closed soul's ... [+]more
I shall say it again, exquisite! I read this over and i still feel that the 'death' in this write interprets as the eventual unveiling of truths [?]. Indeed, the question still stands. I like how this piece allows one to search it from different angles to see in what other ways it could possibly interpret.. and i must say, there are many thoughts. Perhaps they differ from reader to reader, but the aforementioned notion was strongest.
""images of dream-like beliefs flutter behind closed soul's eyelids"
Those lines still stand out to me, they're just so.. beckoning. A beautiful write Scriptz! [-]collapse
This is a wonderful piece with it's dark imagery that sheds a light on the realism of life. Even the artwork gives it that touch and the flow is good. Keep writing.....
last line...straight up..deep itself..despite the rest of the poem. and the rest of the poem was deep, too. what i lovee about your writes is that they ALWAYS make me think..soo absolutely thought provoking..it juss makes me want to cryy like..how you write with such beauty and passion..how your words are deep and have so much meaning. unlike so manyy...unique..different. i love you sis!!!
ten stars and a favorite.
xoxo
♥Rissa