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"Illusive Portrayal"
  by `Scriptixz


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beyond the lingering echoes
of an estranged soliloquy
a word languishs, laments...

•••

thrown into the winds of change
as the chords of discord
strum the melancholic melodies
of its withering heartsong

•••

captured in hands of a wilted frame
as images of dream-like beliefs
flutter behind closed soul's eyelids...


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silentious sorrows serenade
my eagerness; swept away in tides
of bittersweet contentment

•••

as waves of memories crash upon
shores of near forgotten, hushed whispers
that consoled, alleviated the grief
with hands of fiery stroke

•••

now they hauntingly murmur,
glorifying heart's torn crescendo
before pews of hooded, unseen eyes...


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night stilled into darkness
as the clouds blanket in rue
casting upon the earth, its deathly shine

•••

- a berlesque that mocks utopian reverie
as thoughts meet the fists of walls-
silenced! until a deadened pulse
from a heart that bleeds through cracks

•••

with much amplitude it did exhaust
the ends of ev'n endless days
it ceased before its sentiment was seized


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a faithless leap of reckoning-
granite heart in submergence
as the maskful joy holds steady

•••

disclaiming the rights of woe
the fringes of soul's capture...
animated with mannequin memories
that tauntingly dance and parade

•••

before the shattering mirrors
like an empty shell masquerading life
as reality dresses its naked belief


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every smile wears the face of reproach
as virisimilitude looms before me
retreating, imploring oblivion

•••

apparitions born of dead promises
as the subconscious fear
adorns the wings of wishes and flies!
the requiem sounds as eulogies begin

•••

written across the midnight skies
to the rustic hues of breaking day
"death" comes to all, even love


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Date Submitted: Jul 26, 2008 (10:06 AM)
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comment icon  COMMENTS (29)
  Bestever
10/07/08 (10:48 AM) 
ur vocab is extroidinary!!!! Ur the perfect girl to collab with:) I love how u put pics to go with words... Loved it!

  Freddy
09/30/08 (08:39 AM) 
Scriptz!!! ur words r unmatched maybe u should paid for doing this lol but serioulsy this one i liked to deep emotion of calm when i read ur stuff n this one is another masterpiece

  ComplexConfess...
08/15/08 (08:11 AM) 
I shall say it again, exquisite! I read this over and i still feel that the 'death' in this write interprets as the eventual unveiling of truths [?]. Indeed, the question still stands. I like how this piece allows one to search it from different angles to see in what other ways it could possibly interpret.. and i must say, there are many thoughts. Perhaps they differ from reader to reader, but the aforementioned notion was strongest. ""images of dream-like beliefs flutter behind closed soul's ...
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  K.C.Colt
08/13/08 (07:07 AM) 
This is a wonderful piece with it's dark imagery that sheds a light on the realism of life. Even the artwork gives it that touch and the flow is good. Keep writing.....

  Rissa14
08/02/08 (08:49 PM) 
last line...straight up..deep itself..despite the rest of the poem. and the rest of the poem was deep, too. what i lovee about your writes is that they ALWAYS make me think..soo absolutely thought provoking..it juss makes me want to cryy like..how you write with such beauty and passion..how your words are deep and have so much meaning. unlike so manyy...unique..different. i love you sis!!! ten stars and a favorite. xoxo ♥Rissa

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